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T202 Art of Story | AY2025 Semester 1
T202 故事的艺术 |2025 学年第一学期

Lesson 17 & 18 STUDENT Submission Document
第 17 课和第 18 课学生提交文件

Individual (AEL)
个人 (AEL)


Rename the file this way: T202-AY25S1_L17-L18_Submission_<NAME>_<STUDENT ID>
按以下方式重命名文件:T202-AY25S1_L17-L18_Submission_<NAME>_<STUDENT ID>

NAME: _____________________
名称:_____________________

RP EMAIL: _____________________
RP 电子邮件: _____________________

Assignment:
分配:

(This counts toward to your Attendance being marked ‘Present’ in Lessons 17 and 18 [AELs]) Notes
(这计入您在第 17 课和第 18 课 [AEL] 中的出勤率被标记为“出席”])笔记
:

The assignment spans Lessons 17 and 18
作业跨越第 17 课和第 18 课

Submission is only at the end of lesson 18 at 2359hrs (11:59pm) on lesson day.
仅在上课当天 2359 时(晚上 11:59)第 18 课结束时提交。


As an Individual,
作为个人,

Refer to the story, The Bully, by Roger Kiser. Click on the embedded icon to open the file.
请参阅罗杰·基泽 (Roger Kiser) 的故事 《恶霸》(The Bully)。单击嵌入的图标以打开文件。

Use this Submission Document (WORD, in a .doc format) provided.
请使用提供的此提交文件(WORD,.doc 格式)。

Answer all questions in the document. After completion, save it with the naming convention given, then submit the final file into your class Padlet.
回答文档中的所有问题。完成后,使用给定的命名约定保存它,然后将最终文件提交到你的类 Padlet 中。

Read, research, and analyse the given story. Answer the guiding questions as an individual.
阅读、研究和分析给定的故事。以个人身份回答指导性问题。

Story Element
故事元素

Guiding Questions for Critique
批评的指导性问题

Responses
反应

Guiding Questions for Improvement
改进指导性问题

Responses
反应

Main Character (MC)
主角 (MC)

In what ways does the MC feel authentic or lacking?
MC 在哪些方面让人感觉真实或缺乏?

What parts of their personality or motivation seem underdeveloped?
他们的性格或动机的哪些部分似乎不发达?

What specific details, actions, or decisions could you add to make the character more relatable or layered?
您可以添加哪些具体的细节、动作或决定来使角色更具相关性或层次感?

Quest
寻求

What drives the MC’s Quest? Is there even a Quest in this particular story? If there is a Quest, does it feel emotionally compelling or too distant from their personal stakes?
是什么推动了 MC 的探索?这个特定的故事中甚至有任务吗?如果有 Quest,它是否感觉在情感上引人注目或与他们的个人赌注相去甚远?

How can the Quest be clearer and be more meaningful? How can the MC’s fears, values, or backstory help clarify a Quest?
如何让 Quest 更清晰、更有意义?MC 的恐惧、价值观或背景故事如何帮助澄清任务?

Internal Obstacle
内部障碍

What personal flaws or emotional struggles affect the MC’s journey in this story? Are these explored in a subtle or obvious way?
哪些个人缺陷或情感挣扎影响了这个故事中 MC 的旅程?这些是以微妙还是明显的方式探索的?

What new scenes, reactions, or conflicts could you create to better highlight the internal tension of the MC’s and other characters’ face?
您可以创建哪些新的场景、反应或冲突来更好地突出 MC 和其他角色面部的内在紧张感?

External Obstacle
外部障碍

What outside forces challenge the MC? Are these Obstacles surprising, escalating, or too predictable?
哪些外部力量对 MC 提出了挑战?这些障碍是令人惊讶的、不断升级的还是太可预测了?

How can the Obstacle be developed to create more conflict, raise the stakes, or push the MC to grow?
如何开发障碍来制造更多冲突、提高赌注或推动 MC 发展?

Character Transformation Arc
角色变形弧

Identify the type of Character Transformation Arc, then explain why you decided on this arc.
确定 Character Transformation Arc 的类型,然后解释您为什么决定这个 Arc。

Write in your own words a short paragraph of 60-70 words.
用你自己的话写一小段 60-70 字。


Explain why the Character Transformation Arc connects the audience and how it serves the story’s purpose.
解释为什么 Character Transformation Arc 将观众联系起来,以及它如何服务于故事的目的。

Write in your own words. Use of AI is not allowed. Write a short paragraph of 60-70 words.
用你自己的话写。不允许使用 AI。写一小段 60-70 字。

Main Character (MC)
主角 (MC)

Before >
> 之前

Catalyst >
催化剂>

After

Write in your own words a short sentence here.
在这里用你自己的话写一个简短的句子。

Write in your own words a short sentence here.
在这里用你自己的话写一个简短的句子。

Write in your own words a short sentence here.
在这里用你自己的话写一个简短的句子。

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